【高三英语】作文训练4 ------ 建议信-远安县第一高级中学

【高三英语】作文训练4 ------ 建议信

作者：高三英语甘晓曦来源：发布时间：2018年06月23日

假定你是李华，在社交媒体上看到了加拿大女孩Linda的求助信息： I want to learn Chinese. I can speak English well. I can also teach you if any native speaker is interested…, 请写封邮件，告诉她你可以帮她学习中文。要点包括：1. 自己情况；乐意帮忙；互相学习 2. 学习中文建议

写作提示

Para 1交代写信目的：告知可以教她学习中文

巧用非谓语: Learning/ Knowing that…, I’m more than/exceedingly willing to give you a helping hand.

Para2 三个层次，注意层次间的过渡

1. 简要介绍自己情况，互相学习

I wonder if you can be so kind as to / kind enough to help with my English.

It couldn’t be better if we could help each other.

2. 学习中文的建议（至少两条）

※过渡词：First and foremost, first of all, in the first place, to begin with, /

Besides, in addition, additionally, furthermore, what’s more, more importantly, /

Most importantly, what’s the most important is that…, what matters most is that… /

Last but not least, at length^最后.

※“ 祈使句，and you will …” 结构

Practice as much as possible, and you will make progress steadily.

※“ The + 比较级…, the + 比较级…” 结构

The more you practice, the more fluent Chinese you will speak.

{C}※ {C}虚拟语气“ If I were you, I would do …”

If I were you, I would seize every chance to speak Chinese more.

{C}※ {C}“ Not only can you do (倒装结构)…, but you can also do…”

Not only can you practice your spoken Chinese, but you can also make more friends.

※“ Only in this way / by doing sth / when + 从句 will/can you do (倒装结构) …”

Only by practicing more can you speak fluent Chinese.

3. 总结：如果采纳建议，将会取得进步

If you took/ should take/ were to take my suggestions into consideration/ account,

= Should you take/ Were you to take my suggestions into consideration/ account, I’m firmly convinced that you would make steady/ rapid progress in Chinese.

Para 3 表达期待和祝愿

May you be blessed with steady progress / an enjoyable learning experience.

佳句诵读

1. Seeing the information you posted online, I would like to help you out and improve my English as well. (徐青芸)

2. Recently, having heard that you are longing to^渴望learn Chinese well, I am willing to come to your assistance^来帮你. (王楚壹)

3. Having read your message posted online, I believe I am exactly the person you are looking for. I have strong grounds for believing that with our joint efforts^共同努力, both of us are bound to ^一定make progress. (周徐维)

4. Knowing that you have a good command/ knowledge/ grasp of English, I wonder if you are kind enough to teach me. (张碧霞)

5. As long as ^只要we help each other, we are bound to^一定make remarkable^显著的progress.(高兴星)

6. As a Chinese student who was born in China, I am able to speak/ am capable of speaking standard Chinese. Hearing that you are crazy about Chinese, I can’t wait to inform you that I’m very happy to help you. (刘星)

7. Time permitting = If time permits, I will teach you Chinese online every night. (田采辰)

8. The more Chinese books you read, the better your spoken Chinese will be. (郭怡馨)

9. Were you to = If you were toaccept me as your Chinese teacher, I would beexceedingly^极其delighted.(李安然)

10. I’m willing to help you with my maximum efforts^{尽最大努力}. To begin with, if you are committed to^全心投入learning Chinese well, what you should do now is (to) read Chinese books and watch Chinese movies. It will definitely^一定get your Chinese improved. (王绍玲)

11. So meaningful is it that we can help/ assist each other. (杨玲媛)

12. As a native speaker, I think I am the most suitable one to help you because of my fluent Chinese. In this way, we are bound to have a wonderful experience, which will remain vividin the depths of our mind. (陈邦烨)

13. As a native speaker, I can speak Chinese quite fluently and correctly, for which I have great grounds for believing that I can come to your assistance.(李双)

14. What is of greater significance is that you need to practice as much as possible while learning Chinese. Words would fail to convey my delight if I could help you. (付丹丹)

佳作欣赏

Knowing that you have some difficulty/ trouble/ problems in learning Chinese, I’m more than willing to help you.

Since I’m a native Chinese, I have strong grounds for believing that I’m qualified^有资格 to teach you. Meanwhile, eager/ longingto improve my spoken English, Iwonder if you can be so kind as to help me so that we can learn from each other.As for learning Chinese, my suggestions are as follows^如下. In the first place, as a saying goes, “ Practice makes perfect”. So you are supposed to keep a diary using as much Chinese as possible. What’s more, reading Chinese novelsintended for ^为^…^设计安排foreignersand chatting with me online are definitely of great benefit to you.Were you to take the suggestions above into consideration, you wouldmake steady progress.

To put it briefly^简言之, I will spare no effort to help you andI’m firmly convinced thatour efforts will eventually pay off.May you be blessed with everything you do. 佘傲雪

Learning that you are looking for a native speaker to help you learn Chinese, I’m writing to inform you that I am qualified to be your partner to assist each other.

Honestly speaking, I’m keen on^喜爱English. However, without fluent English, I couldn’t go abroad for further study. So I also need your help. As to Chinese learning, there are some suggestions, which I think make be beneficial to you. First and foremost^首先, speak as much as possible, and you will speak fluent Chinese. Additionally, always keep a pen in your hand. Whenever you come across a complex word, just write it down several times to help yourself remember it. I have great grounds for believing that we will make progress steadily with the assistance of each other.

I wouldn’t appreciate it more if you were willing to study with me. Looking forward to your early reply. 钟舜兴

Knowing your situation online, I’m willing to help you with your Chinese learning. As a matter of fact, I’m looking for a foreigner to give me a hand in English. So I’m convinced that we can help each other.

I am a native Chinese who has a good command of standard Chinese. So I have strong grounds for believing that with my constant help, your Chinese will become better and better. Here I’d like to give you some suggestions, which I hope will have positive effects on you. In my opinion, the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Additionally, reading more Chinese books and watching more Chinese films will be of great benefit.Not onlycan they help improve your Chinese, but they can also help you understand Chinese culture.

I sincerely hope that you can take my advice into account. And your prompt^立刻的 reply will be highly appreciated. 胡培宇

Having seen your assisting information from the social media, I’m writing to tell you that I can give you a helping hand.

First and foremost^首先,there is no denying that I have a better understanding of Chinese since I am a native Chinese. Knowing that you are excellent in English, I think it couldn’t be better if we can learn from each other. As for learning Chinese, I will offer you some suggestions, hoping you will find them practical and beneficial. First of all, talk with native speakers or watch Chinese films as much as possible, and you are bound to improve your Chinese. More importantly,what you should keep in mind is that practice makes perfect. Only by practicing more can you achieve success in your Chinese learning.

Words would fail to convey my happiness if you would take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. 张蔡蕊

I’m exceedingly excited to see your information on the internet. I would like to teach you Chinese, which is hard for foreigners to learn.

As a native senior school student, I have strong grounds for believing that I am more qualified than others. In order to master Chinese, knowing how to read Chinese words correctly is of great significance. As an old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So you are supposed to read aloud more. If you insist on practice, I’m firmly convinced that you will succeed in learning it well. By the way, I find it difficult to learn English. Could you help me?

May you be blessed with great improvement on your Chinese. Your early reply will be highly appreciated. 张明望

（朋友参加中资公司面试前感到困难，给他提建议）

Dear Jack,

Knowing that you are at a loss^不知所措how to make preparations for a successful interview in a Chinese company, I’m writing to give you some advice.

First and foremost^首先, you’d better know that company in advance, including its history, management, products, and so on. During the interview, keep a smile on your face and always be confident in yourself, which can leave the interviewers a favorable^良好的 impression. Additionally, being good at oral/ spoken Chinese will definitely^一定 multiply^增加 the chance of your success. Therefore, I advise you to practise Chinese as often as possible in your daily life.